2 Semester, bootclub und bar 2

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Comment by Andrew Cole on May 15, 2013 at 8:34am

andrew.rr.cole@gmail.com

Comment by Maciej on May 14, 2013 at 8:27pm

sure tell me ur mail.

Comment by Andrew Cole on May 6, 2013 at 9:12pm

Hi,! 
Firstly I really like this project. Really nice.
Second, Im curious as to how to created the split in your piping at the door? I am working on a studio project myself trying to achieve something similar but it is not as sleek. I have a precedent of how to do some grid splitting using points to repel, but I cannot seem to get the pulled curtain effect you have achieved.  

I was wondering if you could perhaps post a definition you used? Thanks!~ :D

Comment by Maciej on April 23, 2013 at 10:57am

Thats how it look now, i tried to render the glass with higher transparency but the effect seems the same i also added higher reflections and added some with ps but well thats the result maybe. I want do 3 more. Maybe i can post them as well.

Comment by Mark Foxworth AIA, LEED AP on April 23, 2013 at 9:10am

I completely agree with Sebastian.  I was going to say the same thing.  Very cool project, just make that glass really punch.  If you can get it to reflect that very dramatic sky it will provide a great contrast to the field of facade elements.  I like the mono/dual-tone quality of the image (don't lose that).  I'd add some texture to the ground.  If it's sand, some scruffy beach grasses could be nice.  If it's rock, show it.  Let the whiteness of the facade elements be the whitest feature so as to draw the eye.

Comment by Sebastian L. on April 23, 2013 at 4:50am

Well, as always, there are no stupid questions, ... ;) cap the holes, like in the attached pic. 

Comment by Maciej on April 23, 2013 at 3:15am

It's just a project from the Second semester, im higher now im just working on it for my portoflio.

Thank I will try it I'm still need to learn a lot about the programs. I will change it thank you.

Btw do you know how can i close a pipe? in Grasshopper. Haha stupid question.

Comment by Sebastian L. on April 23, 2013 at 3:06am

I suggest changing the glass to a darker blue glass, with sky reflections (better use a skydome or HDRI map). Put some more dramatic shadows to the facade, the sky influences the brightness of the facade. The beach, well, at the moment it is white, some texture would be nice with a gradient to the back, bright to dark, gives more depth. The water doesn't fit to the beach, it should be sth mor like small waves, breaking the beach:
http://quarknet.de/fotos/landschaft/wasser/brandung.jpg

Put a boat in the back or sails, ...

2nd semester?! Nice, in my 2nd semester we needed to layout and color renderings by hand, ... ;)

Have fun! cheers!